I am Samuel, a Year 7 student attending Sacred Heart College. I am part of a trial period in which they are trying out students to be blog commenters, which means it is my first experience with this sort of position. However, I did complete the Summer Learning Journey as a student in previous years.
Mahatma Gandhi was a very key part of India's history and in reality, part of the world's history. I say this because not many people have been able to lead independence movements without violence, which shows how much of a peacemaker he was, as well as his will for freedom. He is also very outspoken about abuse to animals.
I like the presentation and layout of your blog post, however, don't forget to attribute the images you use. Attributing images is the act of acknowledging the source or where you found the image or piece of information. This is vital and you can be permitted to show the attribution in college assessments and in later life.
Though this is very minimal, I think it is worth mentioning that maybe you should re-read your work, to make sure that the correct punctuation and grammar is added. I will now end with a very short quote from Mahatma Gandhi. " The greatness of a nation can be judged by the way it's animals are treated." - Mahatma Gandhi.
Good Evening Victoria,
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Mahatma Gandhi was a very key part of India's history and in reality, part of the world's history. I say this because not many people have been able to lead independence movements without violence, which shows how much of a peacemaker he was, as well as his will for freedom. He is also very outspoken about abuse to animals.
I like the presentation and layout of your blog post, however, don't forget to attribute the images you use. Attributing images is the act of acknowledging the source or where you found the image or piece of information. This is vital and you can be permitted to show the attribution in college assessments and in later life.
Though this is very minimal, I think it is worth mentioning that maybe you should re-read your work, to make sure that the correct punctuation and grammar is added. I will now end with a very short quote from Mahatma Gandhi.
" The greatness of a nation can be judged by the way it's animals are treated." - Mahatma Gandhi.
This is very good work, well done, Victoria.
Kind Regards,
Samuel